Autumn whispered the melody of existence to my soul
when nature began to breathe slowly,
gave me a kiss of life
while leaves were bidding farewell to the trees,
secreted my innocence among teaming leaves on the ground,
protected me aganist merciless winter
thanks to sun smiling gently behind the clouds,
surrounded me with its all features:
neither as cheerful as summer
nor as gloomy as winter
in the middle of all feelings,
neither as chilling as snow
nor as burning as summer sun,
just as fragile as barren trees
but as strong as winds

yeah, a piece of melancholy...
ReplyDeleteyeah, melancholy and i wonder that did u like it coz ur sincere thoughts are important for me
ReplyDeleteO yes,it is a succesful example of the free verse and I especially liked ur firs line.
ReplyDeleteUr images are impressive and getting better.
good work Tupçem.
moony...
Beautiful image!! And lovely poem, it certainly makes me miss the fall in new england.
ReplyDeleteYağmur, thanks a lot for encouraging words, they are really valuable for me
ReplyDeleteAshley, thanks a lot for ur visit and for ur kind comment, visit anytime u want
this really tells a lot!!! great writing tugce :) keep it up!!
ReplyDeletethanks a lot for ur support and i am very glad that u loved it take care sweetie
ReplyDeletewow
ReplyDeleteclapping from the last row.
will you both be writers , you n yagmur.
<< am trying to play da music but I ain't got no instrument. would de pan n da spoons be enough ^_^'
hahaaaaa((: thanks for ur compliment i have never thought that i am good enough to be a writer but yağmur really deserves this and this is what moony really wants and little brother, good luck in playing music and everything would be enough for trying even if a whistle hahaaa((:
ReplyDeleteAw beautiful- sweet girl.
ReplyDeletethanks a lot((:
ReplyDeleteTupçem thanks a lot.
ReplyDeleteI am just a shy ameteur;)
moony, those are my sincere thoughts about u and u are more than a shy ameteur i am sure that u will reach all of ur aims about writing
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem for a start of a beautiful autumn!
ReplyDelete"while leaves were bidding farewell to the trees", so lovely!!!
thanks a lot for ur kind comment((:
ReplyDeleteWhat a great poem!! Congrats!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for commenting. :)
thanks a lot for stopping by and for ur nice comment, welcome anytime u want
ReplyDeleteGorgeous picture and words!
ReplyDeletethanks a lot for ur visit and ur comment((:
ReplyDeleteHi, thanks for visiting me :) I really like this, very descriptive, and the accompanying picture is perfect!
ReplyDeletethanks a lot for ur nice words visit anytime u want((:
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