twilight

When life offers you a dream so far beyond any of your expectations, it’s not reasonable to grieve when it comes to an end.

Sunday, September 6, 2009

AUTUMN


Autumn whispered the melody of existence to my soul

when nature began to breathe slowly,

gave me a kiss of life

while leaves were bidding farewell to the trees,

secreted my innocence among teaming leaves on the ground,

protected me aganist merciless winter

thanks to sun smiling gently behind the clouds,

surrounded me with its all features:

neither as cheerful as summer

nor as gloomy as winter

in the middle of all feelings,

neither as chilling as snow

nor as burning as summer sun,

just as fragile as barren trees

but as strong as winds

21 comments:

  1. yeah, a piece of melancholy...

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  2. yeah, melancholy and i wonder that did u like it coz ur sincere thoughts are important for me

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  3. O yes,it is a succesful example of the free verse and I especially liked ur firs line.

    Ur images are impressive and getting better.

    good work Tupçem.

    moony...

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  4. Beautiful image!! And lovely poem, it certainly makes me miss the fall in new england.

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  5. Yağmur, thanks a lot for encouraging words, they are really valuable for me

    Ashley, thanks a lot for ur visit and for ur kind comment, visit anytime u want

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  6. this really tells a lot!!! great writing tugce :) keep it up!!

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  7. thanks a lot for ur support and i am very glad that u loved it take care sweetie

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  8. wow

    clapping from the last row.

    will you both be writers , you n yagmur.

    << am trying to play da music but I ain't got no instrument. would de pan n da spoons be enough ^_^'

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  9. hahaaaaa((: thanks for ur compliment i have never thought that i am good enough to be a writer but yağmur really deserves this and this is what moony really wants and little brother, good luck in playing music and everything would be enough for trying even if a whistle hahaaa((:

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  10. Tupçem thanks a lot.

    I am just a shy ameteur;)

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  11. moony, those are my sincere thoughts about u and u are more than a shy ameteur i am sure that u will reach all of ur aims about writing

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  12. Beautiful poem for a start of a beautiful autumn!

    "while leaves were bidding farewell to the trees", so lovely!!!

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  13. thanks a lot for ur kind comment((:

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  14. What a great poem!! Congrats!
    Thank you so much for commenting. :)

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  15. thanks a lot for stopping by and for ur nice comment, welcome anytime u want

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  16. thanks a lot for ur visit and ur comment((:

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  17. Hi, thanks for visiting me :) I really like this, very descriptive, and the accompanying picture is perfect!

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  18. thanks a lot for ur nice words visit anytime u want((:

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